Question

下面是一副漫畫，題目是“媽媽請(qǐng)的家教”。請(qǐng)你描述一下這幅漫畫所表達(dá)的主題以及感受或想法。
注意： 1 詞數(shù)： 100左右；
2 短文第一句已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3 參考詞匯： 鵝 goose

The Tutor Mother Invited
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Answer 1

The Tutor Mother Invited
This is a funny and instructive picture.In the picture we can see the mother hen invites a tutor – a goose to teach her baby chickens to swim. It is known to all that birds like chickens can’t swim at all. But the mother hen wants her babies to learn to swim following the tutor. We can imagine the final result. 
Nowadays, many parents are treating their children like the mother hen. They expect their sons and daughters to become famous when they grow up. However, they don’t know about their children’s interests and advantages. So they invite kinds of tutors to teach their children what they dislike or they are not good at. Finally they do harm to their children.

試題分析：傳統(tǒng)的“書面表達(dá)”題要求書寫的內(nèi)容都由試題決定，無需考生自己編擬。而這篇屬于開放性作文，需要考生根據(jù)試題所提示的要求立意，確定文章的中心思想。同學(xué)們可自由發(fā)揮自己的想象力，猜想幾種情況。由漫畫可以看出，一只鵝在教一只小雞游泳，雞媽媽在旁邊一直叮囑孩子好好學(xué)。本幅圖極具諷刺意味，漫畫通常是諷刺或抨擊社會(huì)上的不好現(xiàn)象或不良社會(huì)風(fēng)氣。據(jù)此，可將雞媽媽類比為廣大父母親，小雞類比為孩子們，盲目教學(xué)是是不科學(xué)的，不合理的，這樣做會(huì)嚴(yán)重限制孩子的發(fā)展和成長(zhǎng)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫作時(shí)注意使用一些句子如It is known to all that--； We can imagine the final result等 2.以第三稱寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主 3.注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，讓文章過渡自然。