Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你的筆友林濤來信說，因學習忙、鍛煉少，最近經(jīng)常生病，影響學習。請根據(jù)提示寫一封英文回信。

要點包括：

1.鍛煉的重要性；

2.鍛煉有利學習；

3.提出鍛煉建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future, for example, jogging and playing basketball.

Time spent in exercise is wasted. Actually, exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind. Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.

Therefore, I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。你的筆友林濤來信說，因學習忙、鍛煉少，最近經(jīng)常生病，影響學習。請根據(jù)提示寫一封英文回信。要點包括：鍛煉的重要性；鍛煉有利學習；提出鍛煉建議。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結尾。二是要詳略得當。三要注意適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，內容齊全，要點突出，文章布局合理，文中使用高級句子。You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health.句中so---that引導結果狀語從句，并使用which引導的非限制性定語從句；It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future,句中if引導條件狀語從句；Time spent in exercise is wasted.過去分詞做后置定語；Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.部分倒裝堪稱經(jīng)典；I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day.賓語從句中的省略should的虛擬語氣甚是巧妙。