第Ⅱ部分

五、短文改錯（滿分10分）：

假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1. 沒處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。

Last night when Steven and I was having a walk in the street, we suddenly heard a painful cry for help under a tree nearby. We quickly ran to the tree and found a boy laying on the ground with a stick in his leg. He had fallen of the tree. Steven suggested we pulled the stick out at once, but I disagreed, Because I had learned little about first aid at school. The stick in the leg would help controlling the bleeding. As there was no telephone, we managed to find a taxi. We took the boy to a nearest hospital. The doctors examined the boy fast and we got to know where the boy lived. So we telephoned his parents and left after he came to the hospital. We did a good deed.

 

【答案】

Was改為were   ；  help后加from   ；   laying改為lying   ；  of改為off   ；   pulled改為pull  ；   little 前加a  ；  controlling改為control  ；  a改為the  ；  fast改為quickly  ；   he改為they   

【解析】略

 

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