Question

現(xiàn)在各種野生動物日趨減少，有些已經(jīng)瀕臨滅種的邊緣。假設(shè)你是王平，結(jié)合以下幾點，請給WWF寫一封信，請他們幫助拯救那些野生動物。
1. 建立野生動物保護區(qū)；
2. 見到獵殺野生動物者立即向“野生動物保護協(xié)會”反映；  
3. 積極宣傳保護野生動物的重要性；
4. 禁止亂砍濫伐；
5. 禁止用野生動物的皮毛做衣服；也不吃野味。
參考詞匯：保護區(qū) protection regions 協(xié)會 association
字?jǐn)?shù)：100-120字
可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，但不能逐句翻譯。勿使用真實姓名。開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入詞數(shù)。
Dear WWF,
Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year.

Answer 1

Now a growing number of wild animals are dying out every year. So how to protect the wildlife draws increasing attention. My advice is as follows.
First, the government should set up some protection regions for wild animals where no one can hunt them. Once found, he or she must be reported to the Wildlife Protection Association. Second, we would like to promote the people’s awareness of protecting wild animals. Third, we had better not cut down as many trees as we wish as the forest is home of the wild animals. Last but not least, we are supposed not to kill wild animals for their fur or eat their meat.
Please help the wild animals and I am strongly convinced that we will live with them in peace with your help.
Yours truly,
Wang Ping

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求給WWF寫一封信，請他們幫助拯救那些野生動物。要點都已經(jīng)給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的the government should set up some protection regions for wild animals where no one can hunt them.這里用了where引導(dǎo)的地點狀語從句，I am strongly convinced that we will live with them in peace with your help.使用了賓語從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象First. Second, Third, Last but not least,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
點評：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。