Question

讀寫(xiě)任務(wù) (滿分25分)    
閱讀下面的短文，按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文。
I have a friend who always smiles even when he’s angry. He even smiles when he has got a headache. I ask him about it and this is the answer, “I try to smile even when I’m breathing or even when I’m sad. Smile is good for your health.”
I’m not a medical student, so I don’t know if there is a medical explanation for why smiling is healthy. But my friend looks younger than his age, maybe because of his habit of smiling. He is a funny, nice, and happy person. He handles all the problems that come to him with a patient smile. He’s not a person in a hurry. His life seems so relaxing but I know for sure, his life is full of problems and his job is full of deadlines, as he lives in a big expensive city on a middle salary… I think hurry and stress is normal, but not for him. He keeps smiling.
I try to do it. I have learnt to smile and it’s fun. Every time a problem comes to me, or I’m stressed, or I’m upset, I try to smile.
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]  1.以約30詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2.以約120詞就“微笑”這個(gè)話題進(jìn)行討論，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)你對(duì)微笑含義的理解；
(2)你認(rèn)為微笑有何作用；
(3)你最難忘的微笑。
[寫(xiě)作要求] 作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。
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Answer 1

The author tells us the story of his friend. His friend keeps smiling even when he meets all kinds of problems. The author tries to learn from his friend.
A smile shows our inner state of emotions, a positive attitude towards life, and is a way to express our feelings. A natural smile is worth a thousand words. It can close the distance between people. When we are faced with some difficulties, a smile can give us confidence.
I will never forget the smile on the faces of the volunteers of the Olympic Games and the Shanghai Expo which showed their friendship, generosity and warmness. And I will never forget the smile on the faces of the waiter in the restaurant, the doorman at the hotel entrance, the teacher in the classroom and the nurse in the hospital. All these smiles are so beautiful that we feel the world is so nice. (29+123)

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