Question

下面幾幅圖描述了小明和爸爸一起去書店買書的一段經(jīng)歷。請你結(jié)合圖畫的內(nèi)容寫一篇英語短文。

要求：首先描述圖中發(fā)生的故事，然后簡要發(fā)表你的議論
注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。
2.詞數(shù)100左右。

Answer 1

Xiao Ming and his father went to a bookstore last Sunday. When he found a book that interested him,
Xiao Ming asked his father “Can I take this book home in secret?”. His father answered, “ No, We should be honest.
A boy who steals books is a bad boy.” Then they went to the cash desk and paid for the books they had chosen.
When leaving the bookstore, his father was in such a hurry that Xiao Ming couldn’t keep up with him.
Xiao Ming said, “Walk slowly, Dad. I can’t follow you.” “ Quickly! They forgot to count one book!” replied his father. It is clear that the father actually “stole” a book in the end.
The story really gets us thinking. Parents should set a good example to their children. It is wise for them to keep in mind the saying ,“Honesty is the best policy”.

試題分析：本文考查了看圖作文的寫作，所體現(xiàn)的觀點(diǎn)是誠信。具體描述小明和爸爸一起去書店買書的一段經(jīng)歷。要求考生根據(jù)圖表描述故事方式的過程，對考生的思維能力要求較高。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評：看圖作文對于考生的要求很高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的審題能力，能根據(jù)圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的。然后根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容組織要點(diǎn)，要注意要點(diǎn)的完整性，不能有遺漏。在完成圖表作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。