Question

假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Paul想了解一下中國(guó)的用餐習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封英文郵件向他作簡(jiǎn)要的介紹。
要點(diǎn)如下：
1.主人請(qǐng)客人先入座； 2.使用筷子進(jìn)餐； 3. 吃飯不出聲響； 4. 客人先動(dòng)筷子；
5.餐畢客人向主人致謝。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。
Hi Paul,
                                                                                          
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                          
                                                                                           
                                                                                          
   
Yours truly
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Paul,
You mentioned you are interested in Chinese table manners, so I’m writing to give you a brief introduction.
When a dinner begins, the host will invite the guests to get seated first. Then one major feature you should remember in China is that we use chopsticks instead of knife and fork, and everyone should try to avoid making unpleasant noise while eating. Whenever a dish is served, the guests are supposed to try it first. Of course, as guests, we should express our thanks to the host after enjoying the dinner.
Such are the basic tips about Chinese table manners. All in all, “When in China, do as the Chinese do” is your best choice.  (115 words)
Yours truly,
Li Hua

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求寫(xiě)一封郵件介紹中國(guó)的用餐習(xí)俗，內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)單，貼近生活。在內(nèi)容上屬于說(shuō)明文，所以其篇章結(jié)構(gòu)可以按照三段式進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。文章第一段是引言段，提出要解決的問(wèn)題，就本文來(lái)講就是要提出寫(xiě)作目的。第二段也就是正文段要介紹中國(guó)的餐桌禮儀，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要簡(jiǎn)單明了，條理清晰。在時(shí)態(tài)方面因?yàn)槭墙榻B習(xí)俗禮儀所以文章可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。此外還要注意適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，正確使用連接詞，以便使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，語(yǔ)言連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔。在介紹餐桌禮儀部分作者按照餐前，餐中，餐后的順序進(jìn)行介紹，使文章條理清楚，層次分明。而且文中多種句式的使用，比如狀語(yǔ)從句：when a dinner begins ,; whenever a dish is served 表語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句one major feature you should remember in China is that we use chopsticks instead of knife and fork ,也讓文章亮點(diǎn)紛呈。此外，倒裝句Such are the basic tips about Chinese table manners和過(guò)渡詞all in all , then, so 等的使用更使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，文字連貫流暢。