Question

假設你是李華，最近，你的外國筆友Alice 沉迷于小說，不能自拔，你為此非常擔心，請按下列要點給對方寫一封信：
闡述危害；
提出建議和解決辦法；
表達信心。
詞數(shù)：120詞左右�？梢赃m當增加細節(jié)，是行文連貫；
Dear Alice,
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Alice
I’m worried about the situation you are facing , in which you find it difficult to get rid of the habit of reading novels. As we all know, we are senior 3 students and we must make use of every minute every day.  Spending too much time on reading novels is a waste of time. And I can’t wait  to give you some suggestions, for fear that you would deserve to have a great loss in your study. On the one hand, you can relax yourself by reading some materials in a certain period of time for example, lunch break. For the rest of the day, you’d better value it more efficiently. I’m willing to wait for your good news, and you can make it, can’t you?
Yours ,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】I’m worried about the situation you are facing , in which you find it difficult to get rid of the habit of reading novels.這句話有非限制性定語從句和it做形式賓語的用法。Spending too much time on reading novels is a waste of time.這句話是動名詞做主語和詞組a waste of time，And I can’t wait  to give you some suggestions, for fear that you would deserve to have a great loss in your study.這句話用for fear that引導的從句，范文里面也用了關聯(lián)詞，如On the one hand,使文章更連貫。