Question

一個(gè)好的學(xué)生應(yīng)該具有許多優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)（如下圖所示），你認(rèn)為哪個(gè)或哪兩個(gè)是最重要的呢？為什么？請(qǐng)分析原因，并結(jié)合自己的生活實(shí)際，寫下你的感悟。

要求：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．文中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)生姓名。
注意：
1．文章連貫，條理清楚，詳略得當(dāng)；
2．結(jié)合實(shí)際，寫出真情實(shí)感。
(要點(diǎn)一：學(xué)生應(yīng)該具有哪些優(yōu)秀品質(zhì))
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Personally speaking, （要點(diǎn)二：你認(rèn)為最重要的品質(zhì)）______________________________
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The reasons are as follows.
（要點(diǎn)三：原因一并結(jié)合生活實(shí)際）
To begin with, _____________________________________________________________
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（要點(diǎn)四：原因二并結(jié)合生活實(shí)際）
Besides, __________________________________________________________________
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From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: （要點(diǎn)五：感悟）_______________
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Answer 1

Being passionate, honest and hard-working, a good student is always listening and learning. Personally speaking, I strongly believe that honesty is the most important among dozens of good qualities.
There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”, and it seems as true as it was when first coined. The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.
Here is one of my secrets. I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores. Having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love. Later days, my conscience swallowed me, growing as I told lie after lie in an effort to conceal my original deceit. I gave it up, and chose to be frank. Wow! It is better to stick to the truth!
From then on, I have kept the following in my minds: If it is not true, don’t say it. If it is not right, don’t do it. Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.

試題分析：考查圖表和提綱式書(shū)面表達(dá)：圖表作文要仔細(xì)審題，找到主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)，還有要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，因?yàn)橛质翘峋V類作文，本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】Being passionate, honest and hard-working, a good student is always listening and learning.這句話是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，There is a proverb that goes “Honesty is the best policy”,這句話that引導(dǎo)的是賓語(yǔ)從句，The most important element in human relationships, whether business or personal, is trust.這句話是讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，Having known the real fact from teachers, they praised and encouraged me, showing their deep love.這是用了現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式做狀語(yǔ)，Honesty is not only the best policy, but also a principle, which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living of life.這句話是用了not only…but also….搭配。這些都是高中學(xué)生必須掌握的用法。