Question

假如你是李華，你打算暑假后到英國某人學(xué)讀書，請你向該大學(xué)招生辦公室主任Mr．Smith寫—封電子郵件，申請入學(xué)資格。
內(nèi)容包括：
1．自我介紹（包括英語水平及其個(gè)人優(yōu)勢）；
2．申請理由（①學(xué)習(xí)深造；②拓寬視野，傳播中國文化）；
3．希望獲得批準(zhǔn)。
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mr.Smith,
I’m Li Hua,a student of Senior 3 from China.I want to apply to your university.I have a good command of English and can communicate with English-speakers freely.I have a quick mind so I did well in all my subjects,especially the science courses.
The reason why I want to apply to your university can be listed as follows.To begin with,I want to further my study in an English-speaking country.Besides,I want to broaden my horizons by learning the culture of your country,and spread Chinese culture at the same time.
I will be very grateful if I could be accepted.And I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua

試題分析：英語寫作是一種創(chuàng)作性的學(xué)習(xí)過程。啟動知識信息儲存，構(gòu)思立意，謀篇布局，遣詞造句，對語言表達(dá)的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性、思維的邏輯性和文章的條理性都比口語要求更高。先審題，弄清寫作要求，審題是寫好作文的前提，理清思路，確定體裁、框架結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。提醒考生注意時(shí)態(tài)及語態(tài)的使用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如have a good command of, communicate with; I will be very grateful if I could be accepted 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句及why引導(dǎo)的定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：To begin with , Besides等等。
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