Question

短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

改正下面短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無(wú)錯(cuò)誤，在答題卡該行右邊橫線上畫(huà)一個(gè)勾（√），請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2.原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。

Last week I went to a movie, which was very touched. It was a sad      1.          .

 movie about a mother and her sons. When the child was a little            2.          .                         

 boy, his mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich           3.          .

 family who had no child. The boy received a very good educa tion         4.          .    

and twenty years later he became doctor. In his hospital, he had a           5.          ..

patient, who was an old lady. He did care too much about her,              6.          . .

for she could hardly afford for the medical care . One evening, the          7.          .

lady died quietly of a serious illness but on her bed the doctor found        8.          ..

a letter, in it he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great             9.          . .

mother. He had wanted to call her mother, but it was too late.              10.          .

Everybody in the theatre was moved to tears.

Answer 1

1．touched→touching．

2．sons→son。

3．very→so。

4．√

5．became∧→a。

6．did→didn’t或在did∧→not。

7．第二個(gè)for去掉。

8．but→and。

9．it→which。

10．had去掉。

解析:

1. 應(yīng)對(duì)文章整體閱讀,以篇章或以句子為單位,進(jìn)行推敲找錯(cuò),切不可孤立地僅著眼于某一行。

2.注意句首和句末，這是考生容易忽略的地方，而錯(cuò)誤有可能就在這個(gè)“隱蔽的角落”

3．做完短文改錯(cuò)題后，務(wù)必要把已改好的短文復(fù)讀一遍，檢查核對(duì)。一般說(shuō)來(lái)，一篇改錯(cuò)應(yīng)該有9處錯(cuò)誤，如果考生實(shí)在找不出錯(cuò)，可以用“排查法”即，將改錯(cuò)�？疾斓囊�素（如，人稱，時(shí)態(tài)，單復(fù)數(shù)，行文邏輯等）一一排查，確保高分。

1．touched→touching．touched是過(guò)去分詞，表示被動(dòng)的意義，這里句子的主語(yǔ)which指a movie，要用現(xiàn)在分詞touching作表語(yǔ)，表示主動(dòng)的意義，意思是“令人感動(dòng)的”。

2．sons→son。根據(jù)文章第3句中的the child及全文，son要用單數(shù)。

3．very→so。so…that是一個(gè)固定句型，意思是“如此……以致于……”。

4．√

5．became∧→a。根據(jù)句子的意思“20年后這個(gè)男孩成了醫(yī)生”，doctor前要用不定冠詞a。

6．did→didn’t或在did∧→not。通讀全文可知，這位醫(yī)生沒(méi)有很好地照顧老太太。

7．第二個(gè)for去掉。afford是及物動(dòng)詞，意思是“負(fù)擔(dān)得起”，后面直接帶賓語(yǔ)。

8．but→and。這里兩個(gè)分句之間是并列關(guān)系而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

9．it→which。后半句是一個(gè)“介詞+關(guān)系代詞which” 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾a letter。it不能引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句．

10．had去掉。這里講述的是過(guò)去的一件事情，要用過(guò)去時(shí)．