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近年來(lái),禽流感頻發(fā),一些國(guó)家在疫區(qū)捕殺所有鳥(niǎo)類(lèi)。對(duì)此,你們班開(kāi)展了主題班會(huì),討論結(jié)果如下:

注意:

1.為使行文流暢,應(yīng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),不能逐條翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)在120左右

3.參考詞匯:禽流感bird flu;家禽poultry;病毒virus;疫苗vaccine

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答案:
解析:

  評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):

  1、要點(diǎn)分

  (1)事件背景分:1分(2)4個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的要點(diǎn)分:8分,自己的態(tài)度:2分(3)細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充分4分(注:如果某個(gè)要點(diǎn)上出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法或表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤等,該要點(diǎn)只能得一半分)

2、整體把握分

  (1)時(shí)態(tài)分:2分(2)思想內(nèi)容正確、語(yǔ)言流暢、連詞等的運(yùn)用:5分(3)亮點(diǎn)分:3分(包括:詞匯、語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用,分析事件深刻等)

  根據(jù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)給例文評(píng)分:

  As it is well-known that bird flu has spread through many countries.They have take some measurements to prevent it.(事件背景分:1分)

  Some think it is necessary to kill all the poultry and birds.At present it is only a good way to prevent the deadly virus from spreading and harming people’s health(要點(diǎn)1,2分)The more the virus spreads to, the more difficult it is to conquer it(要點(diǎn)2,2分)

  However, others think it is unfair and awfully cruel to do so just for the benefit of human beings(要點(diǎn)3,2分)Finding vaccines as quickly as possible is the most important think(要點(diǎn)4,2分)

  As far as I’m concerned, catching and killing birds is not necessary.It may cause the birds to die out.Also, birds are friends to us human beings(自己的態(tài)度,2分)

  其他分:

  文章不是逐條翻譯,而是恰當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充了細(xì)節(jié):4分

  文章時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)是正確的:2分

  文章思想內(nèi)容正確、語(yǔ)言流暢,正確運(yùn)用了連詞:5分

  文章有諸多亮點(diǎn):3分


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