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近年來(lái)，交通事故及其造成的死亡人數(shù)有所增加。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，分析事故原因并提出解決這一問(wèn)題的措施。

原因	司機(jī)：醉駕；疲勞駕駛；超速；開(kāi)車時(shí)接打電話…
行人：闖紅燈；在機(jī)動(dòng)車道上騎車；騎車時(shí)戴耳機(jī)聽(tīng)音樂(lè)…
措施	1. ……   2. …… (至少兩條)

注意：1. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)在字?jǐn)?shù)之內(nèi)。

2. 提示：疲勞駕駛 fatigue driving

The number of road accidents and the deaths arising from those accidents has increased over the past years.        　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

                                                                            

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

The number of road accidents and the deaths arising from those accidents has increased over the past years. Below are some of the major causes of road accidents.

Firstly, some people drive after consuming too much alcoholic drinks or are drunk. Besides, fatigue driving and speeding are also causes of road disasters. Thirdly, drivers speaking on mobile phones, which takes their attention from the road, leads to the happening of accidents, too. However, many accidents are related to pedestrians, some of whom ignore traffic lights or cross roads at a wrong place. On the other hand, sometimes cyclists ride bicycles on the pavement or wear headsets, listening to music, which is an open invitation to accidents.

It is high time we realized the potential causes of traffic accidents and acted to prevent them. The government should make stricter laws to punish those who violate traffic regulations. On top of that, parents and teachers have a responsibility to teach children how to cross the road safely. Only in this way can road users enjoy a safe life. (158words)

【解析】

試題分析：考查表格類作文的寫(xiě)作。是關(guān)于交通事故及其造成的死亡人數(shù)有所增加。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中的提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，分析事故原因并提出解決這一問(wèn)題的措施。具體信息是以表格的形式給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型如drivers speaking on mobile phones, which takes their attention from the road, leads to the happening of accidents, too.等結(jié)構(gòu)，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。如It is high time we realized the potential causes of traffic accidents and acted to prevent them.等

考點(diǎn)：考查表格類作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于表格類作文，此類作文雖然好寫(xiě)，但是要寫(xiě)出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。