Question

假設(shè)你是李華，前天是你的外國(guó)朋友Anne的生日。你本答應(yīng)要參加她的生日聚會(huì)，但你當(dāng)時(shí)正忙著準(zhǔn)備期末考試，不小心忘了赴約。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封信向Anne表達(dá)你的歉意，說(shuō)明原因，并提出補(bǔ)救的方法。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)120詞左右；
2.文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)班級(jí)和姓名；  
3.可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
Dear Anne，
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Yours truly，
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Anne，
I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. I feel awful about it and want to apologize to you.
It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrated the precious moment with you. But the end-of-term examination is around the corner， so I was too busy preparing for the exam that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examination？ I do long for a pleasant chat with you.
It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together. Once again， please accept my sincere apology.
Yours truly，
Li Hua

試題分析：本次寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是就寫(xiě)信對(duì)忘記赴約這件事道歉，屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。具體到本次寫(xiě)作，考生要先審清題目要求，確定好作文人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)、段落等基本內(nèi)容。本文是一封信，因此以第一人稱為主。本文有三個(gè)要點(diǎn)1．道歉；2．說(shuō)明原因3．補(bǔ)救方法。明確作文的基本內(nèi)容后，就是選用準(zhǔn)確的詞匯和恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥觼?lái)表達(dá)。如要點(diǎn)一涉及的主要詞匯有sorry; apologize，選用主系表的基本句式，可以是 I am indeed very sorry that。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如feel awful about，apologize to sb.，It was nice of sb. to do sth.，around the corner, be busy doing，prepare for，long for，chat with；還運(yùn)用句型which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：but，so … that …等等。