Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Nowadays, the term " sense of happiness" has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias. During the National Day holidays, CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by the question " Are you happy now? What exactly is happiness in your eyes?" The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions.
" I would say I'm pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a good job. " said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face.
Though it seemed that most people said they were happy, different voices were still heard and should not be ignored. There was a migrant worker(農(nóng)民工) whose answer to the question was widely spread online. When asked if he was happy, he said " My family name is Zeng", showing his determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness.
The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered " I don't know " in an interview when he was asked the same question: Are you happy?
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1.以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2.以約120個(gè)詞就“幸�！钡脑掝}談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；
（2）請簡述到現(xiàn)在為止讓你覺得最幸福的一件事情；
（3）談?wù)勀銓π腋５睦斫狻?br />[寫作要求]
1作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                                    

Answer 1

When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy, most people gave a positive answer while some didn't. The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didn't know whether he was happy or not.
At present, I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like. As a high school student, I study hard every day and live it to the fullest. It feels good to study hard to fulfill my dreams.
It reminds me of the experience of receiving the scholarship in the middle school. It was a time when my family was going through the extreme financial difficulties. So I made up my mind to win the scholarship, hoping to lighten my parents' financial burden. With great efforts, I made it. At the ceremony, I could see my mom’s smile was brightest among those parents. It was the happiest thing that I will treasure forever.
As far as I am concerned, happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile. When we bring happiness to them, it gives happiness to ourselves.

試題分析：這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：（（1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；（2）請簡述到現(xiàn)在為止讓你覺得最幸福的一件事情；（3）談?wù)勀銓π腋５睦斫�。這道題目要求比較嚴(yán)格，所以在寫作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要求1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己不會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。