Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容寫一篇人物簡(jiǎn)介
【寫作要求】
1. 只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和班級(jí)。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
【參考詞匯】法國(guó)公開(kāi)賽：French Open女單冠軍: singles title大滿貫：Grand Slam

人物簡(jiǎn)介	李娜，1982年2月26日出生，從小就對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)有天賦，6歲開(kāi)始練習(xí)羽毛球，9歲轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)網(wǎng)球；
主要經(jīng)歷及獲得榮譽(yù)	1.  2002年：離開(kāi)網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)，到大學(xué)讀書；兩年后重返球場(chǎng)； 2. 在包括她丈夫在內(nèi)的幾位著名教練的指導(dǎo)下，進(jìn)步神速； 3.  2011年：法國(guó)公開(kāi)賽女子單打冠軍，第一位獲得大滿貫賽事單打冠軍的亞洲網(wǎng)球選手；

Answer 1

Born on Feb 26, 1982, Li Na has a gift for sports from her childhood. She began to practice badminton at the age of six and was introduced to play tennis when she was nine. In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned. With the help /(Under the guidance ) of some famous coaches, including her husband /Following the instructions of several famous coaches, she has been making greater and greater achievements/ progress/ improvement(s) rapidly. As a result she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.

試題分析：這是提綱類短文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)單介紹李娜的基本情況。文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來(lái)，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時(shí)候也不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，形成一個(gè)整體。選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。如：In 2002 she took a break from tennis to study at university, but two years later she returned.及. As a result she won the 2011 French Open singles title, becoming the first player from Asia to win a Grand Slam in singles.都是很好的句式。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。但是一定要地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)法，在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。不要過(guò)分堆砌。