Question

假如你叫李華，是我市一名中學(xué)生。最近，當(dāng)?shù)卣�府正�?jì)劃實(shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)，結(jié)果引起人們的廣泛爭(zhēng)議。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)人們不同的觀點(diǎn)，給當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)社寫一封信，反映這一情況。

贊成觀點(diǎn)	反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)
1．能夠解決交通問題，方便人民生活； 2．有助于太原旅游業(yè)的快速發(fā)展。	1．會(huì)產(chǎn)生噪音，打擾居民平靜的生活； 3．時(shí)常造成交通堵塞。

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參考詞匯：快速公交系統(tǒng)BRT 高架橋overpass
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is going to take place in our city.
                                                                               
                                                                               
Yours truly

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the road construction which is going to take place in our city. Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.
Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable. Besides, it helps promote the economy and improve people’s living environment as well as the image of Shantou as a modern tourist city in the southeast of Guangdong province.
But others believe that the construction work may cause air pollution and traffic jams may appear now and then. What’s worse, the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.

試題分析：考查議論文寫作：本篇寫作題材是當(dāng)?shù)卣�府正�?jì)劃實(shí)施快速公交和橋梁建設(shè)的不同觀點(diǎn)。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，為總述；正方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；反方觀點(diǎn)及依據(jù)；要注意的是：在列舉雙方依據(jù)時(shí)要盡量使語言多樣化；考生應(yīng)該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長(zhǎng)度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當(dāng)使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達(dá)作者的意思�？忌鷳�(yīng)明白高考書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)意思的能力。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】Recently the local government has decided to broaden some narrow roads to build BRT, which has caused a heated discussion among the local people.這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句， Some agree that we should carry out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problems and make our life convenient and comfortable.這句話用了賓語從句和原因狀語從句，the people who are against the construction think that the noise produced by the work will disturb people’s peaceful life.這句話有賓語從句也有定語從句，還有這篇范文使用Besides, What’s worse, 這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更順暢。