Question

據(jù)報道,我國學(xué)生近視率居世界第一。造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因是多方面的, 請你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 為題, 寫一篇英語短文。

內(nèi)容主要包括： 1. 造成學(xué)生近視的原因；  2. 如何保護視力？

注意: 1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié), 以使行文連貫；

3.短文的開頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯:  近視率 rate of myopia

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _______________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.

The causes of myopia are complicated. Firstly, too much homework leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep. Long time of studying makes it difficult to refresh eyesight. Secondly, medical research shows genetic factors also contribute to poor eyesight. In addition, many students don’t form good eye care habits. For example, when reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.

Realizing the reasons of this result, it’s time for us to take measures to protect eyesight. I think the most important is to encourage students to engage in more outdoor activities and create a vision-friendly studying environment.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文, 要求對學(xué)生近視的情況進行分析1. 造成學(xué)生近視的原因；2. 如何保護視力？所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時。字數(shù)要求100-120詞左右。所以要求根據(jù)個人理解說明原因和保護視力的措施。還應(yīng)該注意使用較高級的詞匯和句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如lead to，throw away，As we all know, For example，take measures，engage in，還運用了不定式作主語、賓語； 非謂語作狀語等等。并注意了句子變化和句子之間的銜接如：In addition，What’s more 等等。

考點：提綱作文。