Question

據(jù)報(bào)道,我國(guó)學(xué)生近視率居世界第一。造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因是多方面的, 請(qǐng)你以 "Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?" 為題, 寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

內(nèi)容主要包括：

1. 造成學(xué)生近視的原因；

2. 如何保護(hù)視力？

注意: 1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫；

3.短文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫好, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯:  近視率 rate of myopia

Why are more and more children getting short-sighted?

It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world _______________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

 Dear Li Hua,

I’ve just got your letter and I know learning a foreign language can be challenging for some people. However, there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties.

    Firstly, obtain as large a vocabulary as possible. It is a good habit to do some reading every day and remember some typical sentences. Practice makes perfect. Therefore, doing enough exercises can definitely improve your listening and writing. In this way you are sure to improve your English.

    As for examination anxiety, it’s unnecessary for you to work too late before the exam. Instead, you’d better go to bed earlier than usual, otherwise you would feel tired the next day. It is also suggested that a jug of milk may help you get a sound sleep.

    In addition, consult your teachers if necessary.

    I do hope my advice is helpful to you.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開(kāi)寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如. there are many things you can do to overcome these difficulties、as large a vocabulary as possible、It is a good habit to do some reading 、you’d better go to bed earlier than usual還運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣otherwise you would feel tired the next day ；以及主語(yǔ)從句It is also suggested that等。并注意了句子的銜接如：and、however、in addition、as for等等。層次分明，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。