Question

短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分)
Dear Zhou Lu,
I’m writing a letter ask you for some help.
As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing whatＩsaid, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Facing with this, I felt very upset. I am much angry with her improper behaviour, but I can’t forget the wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I’m afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?
Your friend,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【小題1】letter后面加to
【小題2】friend改成friends
【小題3】去掉on
【小題4】tell 改成told
【小題5】extreme改成extremely
【小題6】his改成 her
【小題7】Facing改成Faced 或去掉with
【小題8】much改成very
【小題9】that改成when
【小題10】How改成What

解析試題分析：
【小題1】letter后面加to，考查不定式做目的狀語，句意：我寫信是為了向你尋求幫助。
【小題2】friend改成friends，主語是Zhang Fei and I所以應(yīng)該是friends
【小題3】去掉on，詞組：“某一天”one day不用加介詞
【小題4】tell 改成told，這篇文章用的是過去時(shí)。
【小題5】extreme改成extremely，修飾angry應(yīng)該是副詞extremely
【小題6】his改成 her，人稱錯(cuò)誤，前面是her，后面也是her
【小題7】表示“面對(duì)…”,可以是Sb facing sth，也可以是Sb be faced with ，所以Facing改成Faced 或去掉with，
【小題8】修飾形容詞angry用very，much一般修飾不可數(shù)名詞，或形容詞，副詞比較級(jí)
【小題9】考查定語從句：先行詞是the wonderful time 定語從句中缺少地點(diǎn)狀語，that改成when
【小題10】考查疑問詞：這句話的do缺少賓語，用疑問詞What。
考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生在上下文語境中對(duì)詞匯語法的掌握情況
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。一般的這類題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)較多。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。