Question

短文寫作（滿分25分）
眾所周知，一個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程是較為復(fù)雜的，其個(gè)性的形成和發(fā)展受諸多因素的影響，比如:
家庭、學(xué)校、社會(huì)、朋友、書籍、名人等。假如《二十一世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》向你約稿，了解至今哪些因素對(duì)你的成長(zhǎng)影響最大。請(qǐng)你以Tracking My Growth為題，按以下要求寫篇英語(yǔ)短文：
1．選擇并陳述對(duì)你的成長(zhǎng)起著很大影響的家庭、學(xué)校、社會(huì)、朋友、書籍、名人等諸多因素中的兩個(gè)或三個(gè)；
2．談?wù)勀愕目捶ê屠碛伞?br />注意：詞數(shù)100—120，文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
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Answer 1

Tracking My Growth
The process of growing up is complex for every person, for there are many influential factors in a person’s growth as well as the development of his personality．As for me, what has affected me most in my both growth and personality are family and friends, the two equally important factors．
After one is born, the first surroundings is the family in which he will grow up．Family plays a significant role in shaping children’s character because it’s children’s most direct source of knowledge and experiences．Those who are brought up in good families tend to possess many pleasant characters and vice versa．
On the other hand, friends in some ways influence him more rapidly than families do．Friends have many different opinions and personalities．Discussing with them builds up his personality．Frankly speaking, I get lots of valuable things from my friends．
Family offers me warmth and care．Friends give me strength and horizons．Therefore, both of them are most influential in my growth

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