Question

根據(jù)以下提示。請給中國日報寫一篇英文簡訊。要點如下：
1、王剛，男，37歲，教授。現(xiàn)在清華大學工作。
2、1983年畢業(yè)于湖南大學，畢業(yè)后執(zhí)教留校。
3、他刻苦鉆研，科研成果顯著。1988年去日本一所大學深造，獲得物理學博士學位。
4、很多國家的大公司以高薪聘請他，他拒絕了。
5、他于1994年毅然回國報效祖國。目前已為祖國作出了很大貢獻。
　　　注意：字數(shù)100左右。

Answer 1

Wang gang – a young Scientist
Dr. wang gang , aged 37 , is now working as a professor in Qinghua University , Beijing. Since he graduated from Hunan University in 1983, he got rich scientific fruit. Later in 1988, he was sent to a university in Japan to go on with his studies. Through hard work, he got excellent results and received a doctor’s degree for physics.
Soon after he became famous, many big companies from different countries tried to invite him to work there and promised to give him high pay . But Dr Wang didn’t accept the invitation , for he made up his mind to work for his own country .
Therefore, he returned to China in 1994. Now he has made great contributions to his motherland.

本文是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇英文簡訊介紹王剛教授的事跡，要點都已經(jīng)給出了，可以根據(jù)要點翻譯，在行文中，我們可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文中就使用了合理的連詞和較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，增色不少。
【寫作亮點】：Dr. wang gang , aged 37 , is now working as a professor in Qinghua University , Beijing. 和Through hard work, he got excellent results and received a doctor’s degree for physics.這兩句，使用了過去分詞做定語，和一些短語，不僅嚴謹?shù)谋磉_完整意思，又使文章渾然一體。同時文章中使用了適當?shù)倪B詞，比如：Later ，Therefore,等，使用文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，渾然一體。