Question

最近你班舉行了以“Should we give money to beggars?”為主題的班會(huì)，假設(shè)你是主持人，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格提供的信息，為此次班會(huì)寫(xiě)一個(gè)總結(jié)。 一些人認(rèn)為 另一些人認(rèn)為 孤寡老人不能自食其力而乞討； 有些學(xué)生因家境貧苦而輟學(xué)去乞討； 有些殘疾人只能以乞討為生； 大部分都是假裝的，乞討只是他們賺錢(qián)的一條捷徑； 這么做會(huì)助長(zhǎng)懶惰； 結(jié)論：應(yīng)該盡力幫助弱勢(shì)群體，但給錢(qián)時(shí)一定要慎重。 [寫(xiě)作要求] 1. 文章的開(kāi)頭已給出。 2．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容。 3．參考詞匯：弱勢(shì)群體  inferior group [評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。 We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions.____________________________________________________________

Answer 1

We have had a class meeting today on whether we should give money to beggars and we have different opinions.
Some believe that we should give money to those who are in bad need of our help. Among these beggars are the elderly, drop-outs and the disabled, who can hardly make a living due to old age, poverty or physical inability. Many more students, however, think we shouldn’t give them money because most of the beggars are begging in hope of earning some easy money. Besides, to give money would encourage them to be lazy even if they have the ability to work.
In general, we should help the people of the inferior group, but we should remain sensible when giving them money.

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