Question

假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明：

李明：高個子，戴眼鏡

航班號：CA985

到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。

­­­­­­­­­­­­­­­Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

_______________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。請你以李華的名義給筆友Peter寫封信，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，用英語給他寫封信，要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，要在審題的基礎(chǔ)上，全面的表達(dá)要點(diǎn)，不能遺漏，注意本文使用一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

使用了定語從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象also等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查書信類短文寫作。

點(diǎn)評：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。