Question

假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Peter寫(xiě)封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開(kāi)會(huì)，帶去他想要的那幅中國(guó)畫(huà)，同時(shí)詢問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說(shuō)明：

李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡

航班號(hào)：CA985

到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和介紹語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?___________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

寫(xiě)信是中學(xué)生最熟悉的事，這種形式的寫(xiě)作貼近學(xué)生生活，使他們有話可說(shuō)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：

（1）注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給筆友Peter寫(xiě)信。

（2）注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用：信中對(duì)將來(lái)事情（如叔叔開(kāi)會(huì)、航班抵達(dá)等）的描述與寫(xiě)信人的請(qǐng)求應(yīng)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，叔叔李明的情況介紹用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

（3）要點(diǎn)全面，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。

（4）注意恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使各個(gè)要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫，行文通順。

（5）適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【考點(diǎn)定位】考場(chǎng)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。