Question

書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的高一年級(jí)的李華，你班里有一名同學(xué)叫張明，他因一時(shí)無法融入新的班級(jí)集體而感到很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫封信。信的內(nèi)容包括如下：

1. 幫他分析原因；2. 給他提出建議。

注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；詞數(shù)100~120(信的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

 Zhang Ming,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely.______________________________________________________________

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Zhang Ming,

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because we are all new here and our classmates are not quite familiar with each other. But I think you can make it if you follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and freely voice your own opinions. At the same time, learn to listen to others’ views. Second, you should learn about our classmates’ likes and dislikes. Gradually you can find something in common with us. In this way, you can get to know more about different people around you.

Above all, do remember that participating in activities with others together makes you share something with them. With time going on, I’m sure we’ll know you better and like to make friends with you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua 

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的東西，考生不難理解寫作的目的和要求，文章的題目已給出�？忌�重點(diǎn)應(yīng)認(rèn)真審題，審題包括幾個(gè)方面:1.文章的時(shí)態(tài)2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的把握準(zhǔn)確到位。3.考生要盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。

4.考生注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用語言的能力和語言的組織能力

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題難度適中。命題人作文的要點(diǎn)沒有一一列出，既給了學(xué)生的思維空間，又給了學(xué)生發(fā)揮自己的語言組織的能力的空間，沒有把學(xué)生的思維控制在某些要點(diǎn)的組織上。