Question

假如你叫李華，你的美國朋友Teddy即將到中國來旅游，他對中國的古文化遺址很感興趣，尤其是對長城向往已久，請你給Teddy寫一封120詞左右的e-mail，向他簡要介紹一下有關(guān)長城的情況：
1. 長城位于中國北部，全長約6,700公里，1987年被列入《世界遺產(chǎn)名錄》；
2. 長城從秦朝開始修建，修建長城的最初目的是抵御外來敵人進(jìn)攻。
3. 長城是古代勞動人民創(chuàng)造的奇跡，是人類歷史上最偉大的工程之一。
參考詞匯：世界遺產(chǎn)名錄the World Heritage List；奇跡wonder
Dear Teddy,
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Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua  

Answer 1

Dear Teddy,
I am glad to hear that you will come to China. You’ve told me that you are very interested in ancient Chinese cultural relics, especially the Great Wall. Now, I will give you a brief introduction to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers. In 1987, it was added to the World Heritage list. The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies. The Great wall is a wonder that was created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.
Wish you all the best. Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，本文是介紹中國的偉大奇跡長城，給出部分的要點。本文的難點在于選擇合適的詞匯把文字提示的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，同時要注意選擇合適的連接詞把各要點連接起來。也要使用多變的句式讓文章充滿變化，不要過于死板。
點評：本文介紹的是中國的長城，要點給出不多。對考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分布各個要點，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞來連接成流暢的短文。在選擇詞匯時要注意選擇一些相對高級的詞匯讓文章的層次更高。