Question

目前,學(xué)校存在少數(shù)學(xué)生考試作弊現(xiàn)象,某英文雜志社擬對此現(xiàn)象向中學(xué)生征文,標(biāo)題是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations”.請根據(jù)下列提示用英語寫一篇短文稿. 要點如下:
主要原因：考試偏多,偏難; 不用功,懶惰; 取悅父母,老師;
個人看法：作弊不對,違反校規(guī); 要誠實努力學(xué)習(xí);......（其他看法）
注意：1.包括所有要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.  2.標(biāo)題和開頭已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)
3.詞數(shù) 100 左右   

Answer 1

My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.
On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations. What’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，文章的要點都以表格的形式給了出來，提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于要點不能遺漏和省略，表達(dá)一定要全面，覆蓋要覆蓋的所有內(nèi)容。要表達(dá)全面清楚。要注意謀篇布局，文章使用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，在翻譯要點的時候，不要一定按照它的順序，可以靈活表達(dá)。在選擇詞匯時要選擇一些高級的詞匯，；在句型的選擇方面要運用多樣化的句型如倒裝句，強調(diào)句，省略句等豐富文章的表達(dá)，讓文章更有層次，更有文采。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：On the other hand另一方面, instead of 代替，范文中的句式多變，運用不同的語法知識： It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school. 這句話用了主語從句，As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us.這句話用了定語從句， So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.這句話用了省略句，    In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools.這句話用了it做形式主語，文章還使用了What’s more,這樣的詞使文章更加連貫。