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閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.
The money was all my savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation(捐助),and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.
Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.
[寫作內容]
用約30個詞概括上文的主要內容。
用約120個詞就Miss McCarty的捐助談談你的想法,內容包括:
你如何看待她的捐助行為;
你認為她的捐助對受惠學生有哪些影響;
如果你自己要捐助,你會選擇哪個群體并陳述理由。
[寫作要求]
作文中可以使用親身經歷或虛構的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。
作文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
[評分標準]
概括準確,語言規(guī)范,內容合適,篇章連貫。

Oseola McCarty,an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle,donated a great deal of money to a university ,which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition.In return,she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.
Virtuous and warm-hearted,the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties,thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.
From where I stand,not only will the lady’s generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money,but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.
Given the choice,I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition.Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance.For one thing,generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them,especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns.For another,just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand;flavor in mine.That is to say,great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers’ souls as well.
To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society,we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.

試題分析:根據提示1:用約30個詞概括上文的主要內容,需要考生能夠讀懂所給的原文,文中的復雜的句子結構能夠理解,要用最簡短的語言概括短文大意,不能抓住細節(jié)鋪開來寫,那樣字數就會超過了,只介紹了Oseola McCarty做了什么,社會影響是什么就行了。
提示2:用約120個詞就Miss McCarty的捐助談談你的想法,考生要對Oseola McCarty的做法,發(fā)表自己的觀點,要注意主語及動詞時態(tài)。寫作中注意使用連接詞,做到語義通順,符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】短文用了短語和諺語,增加了文章的色彩,如:a great deal of;arouse public attention;make donations to;roses in her hand;flavor in mine等;還用了一些過渡詞或句子;如:For one thing,For another;That is to say等;使短文讀起來流暢自然。還用了一些關系詞,如:which,who及when引導的定語從句,使句子結構復雜,并且用了not only…but also引導的倒裝句,增加了作文的亮點。
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