Question

假如你是高中生李越，你所在的社區(qū)正在開展“創(chuàng)建文明社區(qū)”活動。請用英語給社區(qū)主任寫一封120個詞的信。信中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1，說明寫信的目的：
2．簡述社區(qū)飛速發(fā)展的景象以及存在的一些不文明行為；
3．提出建議。
注意：信的抬頭、落款及信的第一句己給出（不計詞數(shù)）
參考詞匯：文明社區(qū)- civilized community
Dear director,
I am Li Yue, an inhabitant in Chaoyang Community.                           
Yours Faithfully,
Li Yue

Answer 1

I am Li Yue, an inhabitant in Chaoyang Community.  I’m writing to tell you my opinion of ongoing efforts to create a civilized community.
I am very glad to see the progress made in the community. The newly built high-rises make the community more beautiful and broadened streets make our life much more convenient. Meanwhile, we can’t turn a blind eye to the fact that the behavior of some people need improving. I have noticed that sometimes people don’t behave properly, for example, spitting in public places, picking flowers in public gardens and so on. What’s worse, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the street.
In my opinion, these bad behaviors will make bad impressions on visitors. So I suggest that more efforts should be made to encourage people to form good habits from now on.
Yours Faithfully,
Li Yue

這是一篇建議信，主題是“創(chuàng)建文明社區(qū)”，文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，包括1，說明寫信的目的： 2．簡述社區(qū)飛速發(fā)展的景象以及存在的一些不文明行為； 3．提出建議�？忌�需要在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行拓展，在寫作的時候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個整體。建議信作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。提出建議要切實(shí)可行，要符合英語習(xí)慣，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。