Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
A young man was complaining about his bad luck and poverty. He frowned (皺眉) all day. A wise old man came to him and said, “Hey, kid, why are you so unhappy?”
“I don’t understand why I'm so poor!” he replied.
“Poor? I think you are very wealthy!” the wise old man said sincerely.
The young man was puzzled, “Why do you say that?”
“Supposing someone offers you one thousand dollars to cut your finger off, would you do it?” “Of course not!” the young man replied.
“And ten thousand dollars to chop your leg off?” “Certainly not!”
“A hundred thousand dollars to scoop your eyes out?” “Surely not!”
“One million dollars to turn you into a 90-year-old man immediately?”
“Definitely not!”
“Ten million dollars to take your life right away?” “Absolutely not!”
The wise old man said with a smile, “So there you are. You already possess what is worth more than ten million dollars. Why are you still sad to be so poor?” After the young man listened to the wise old man's words, it started to become clear to him.
[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
1. 以約30個(gè)詞概括文章的主要內(nèi)容；
2．然后以“健康比金錢(qián)更重要”為題發(fā)表自己的，字?jǐn)?shù)大約120左右，內(nèi)容包括：
(1) 對(duì)話中這位年長(zhǎng)智者的觀點(diǎn)是否正確，為什么?
(2) 健康與金錢(qián)的關(guān)系，并試舉例說(shuō)明；
(3) 作為一名高中生，應(yīng)該如何處理健康與金錢(qián)的關(guān)系。
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1.在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

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Health is More Important than Money
A young man was always complaining about his poverty. However, only after a conversation with a wise old man did he realize wealth was not money but health.
I definitely approve the wise old man’s idea that the real wealth is our healthy body rather than enough money. My reason is that it is no use having enough money if we have no health body.
As for the relationship between health and money, in my opinion, health is more important than money. Without good health, it is impossible to do whatever you want to do. For example, supposing you are handicapped in wheelchair, even if you have a big sum of money, you can’t still travel all over the world and go wherever you want to go.
As a result, as a high school student, not only should we be concerned about our study, but we should also make more use of our time to do sports and do more body-buildings.

試題分析：概括原文的大意不是縮寫(xiě)，不能引用原文的語(yǔ)句，它也不是改寫(xiě)，不能把原句加以變形就完事；主要是概括和抽象，把具體的信息用一些具有高度概括功能的詞和句表述出來(lái)。與原文某個(gè)或某些句子完全一致或大部分一致。有同學(xué)寫(xiě)摘要就從原文的開(kāi)頭部分、中間部分和結(jié)尾部分各抄一句，以為這就是“概要”，這種認(rèn)識(shí)是錯(cuò)誤的，這樣的“概要”是得不了分的。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。