Question

21^st Century 英文報開展內(nèi)容為“中學生社會實踐調(diào)查”的征文活動。假設你參加了你校組織的中學生社會實踐活動，請你根據(jù)以下信息，以“井岡之旅”（A Tour to the Jinggang Mountain）為題，敘述其活動情況。
[寫作內(nèi)容]
時   間：5月1日-5日
交通工具：火車
活動內(nèi)容：1、參觀“希望小學”，了解學習情況；
2、與村民同吃住，了解生活狀況；
3、參加田間勞動，體驗農(nóng)民生活。
感   受：1、農(nóng)民的生活條件改善了；
2、因為政府免學費、眾多好心人資助，沒有失學學生。
生詞：學費：tuition fees
[寫作要求]
只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。
文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。
【評分標準】
1．句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準確性和復雜度
2．短文內(nèi)容的完整性和連貫性

Answer 1

A Tour to the Jinggang Mountain
On May 1^st, I participated in a five-day tour organized by our school to the Jinggang Mountain by train. After we got there, first we visited the Hope Primary School, where we got to know the conditions of students’ study in the less developed areas. Soon, we were arranged to live in the houses of local villagers to see what their real life is. There we were able to have meals with them and work in the field to experience the farmer’s life. During the visit, we were excited to find that farmers are living a better life and no children drop out of school because the government pays for their tuition fees and many warm-hearted persons unselfishly sponsor them.

考查提綱作文，考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結(jié)構(gòu)，（2）句子的時態(tài)（3）內(nèi)容要點。尤其是內(nèi)容要點要把握準確到位，話題是敘述“井岡之旅”活動情況。要點已經(jīng)給出。但考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當?shù)氖褂靡恍└呒壘涫胶透呒壴~匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內(nèi)容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要多使用復雜句，一句話中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子：During the visit, we were excited to find that farmers are living a better life and no children drop out of school because the government pays for their tuition fees and many warm-hearted persons unselfishly sponsor them.既有賓語從句，又有狀語從句。