現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已成為一種時尚,網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處,但也有不少問題,請你談談你的看法和建議。字數(shù):120字左右
Online Shopping 

One possible version:
Instead of going to physical stores, more and more people choose to go shopping o line. Actually, online shopping plays an essential role in our daily life owing to much convenience it brings us. furthermore, not only can it save money, but it also offers lots of stores and goods at the same time, which provides additional orderings option and convenience.
As each coin has two sides, online shopping isn’t exception. To begin with, we often receive the shirt with the wrong size, because we can try it by ourselves. Next, due to the low price online, we are likely to lose control and buy many useless things. what’s more, there are many swindlers who  cheat us by opening on fake online store.
In conclusion, as a new booming thing, online shopping does have some benefits, but its potential dangers can not be ignored. Only when we work together can online shopping have a better future.

試題分析:本文是議論文習作,沒有提供材料,要求學生必須把握寫作要求和寫作目的?忌趯懽髦氨匦枵J真審題,首先要注意文章的時態(tài),議論目前的情況,要求讓學生寫對現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物的看法和建議,因此本文必須用第三人稱。根據(jù)題目要求羅列出提綱要點:越來越多的人網(wǎng)上購物,有好的一面,好的就是:1 網(wǎng)上購物扮演著必要的角色;2 給我們帶來方便,3 不僅可以省錢還可對許多商店和產(chǎn)品進行選擇。又有不好的一面:1 買的東西與想要的東西不符;2 由于低價我們可能買回一些無用的東西; 3 可能受騙;羅列提綱之后應該注意句子的銜接,一定用上一些連接詞,用一些高級詞匯以提高作文的檔次。然在書寫上,要干凈整潔的卷面與字數(shù)要求,一般能達到較高的分數(shù)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,比如instead of,more and more people,go shopping o line, plays an essential role in,owing to,To begin with,due to,In conclusion,等;還運用了“not only can it save money, but it also offers lots of stores and goods at the same time, which provides additional orderings option and convenience.”中 not only ……but also……引導句子用部分倒裝,里面還運用了which引導定語從句;同時句子“there are many swindlers who  cheat us by opening on fake online store.”中有who引導定語從句;because we can try it by ourselves.引導原因狀語從句;Only when we work together can online shopping have a better future.only+介詞短語或從句,句子謂語用部分倒裝等等。并注意了句子的銜接如: Actually; furthermore;As each coin has two sides, To begin with, Next, what’s more, In conclusion,等等。
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