Question

假如你是李華，針對(duì)你市目前的交通擁堵問題，給市長寫一封信，提出自己的建議。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 私家車增多和司機(jī)違規(guī)行駛造成交通堵塞；
2. 提出解決的辦法，包括：1）政府鼓勵(lì)人們使用公共交通并限制私家車；
2）修建更多的車道與停車場(chǎng)；
3）教育大眾遵守交通規(guī)則；
3. 希望市長予以回復(fù)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100—120；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯： lane n. 車道;  private car 私家車;  parking lot停車場(chǎng)
traffic jam交通堵塞;   public transport公共交通
Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mayor,
I’m writing to give some suggestions to improve our city’s transportation.
At present, traffic jams have become a major problem in our city every day. The number of private cars has been increasing all the time. What’s more, some drivers disobey traffic rules, thus constantly causing traffic jams.
From my point of view, measures must be taken to solve this problem. First of all, the government should encourage people to use public transport more and at same time limit private cars. What comes next is that more lanes and parking lots should be built. Last but not least, it’s important to educate the public to obey traffic rules.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇建議信，文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，難度不大，在寫作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：建議信作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。提出建議要切實(shí)可行，要符合英語習(xí)慣，所以在寫作的時(shí)候要變換句式，要寫得更為親切直白。