Question

假如你是李華，是一位高二學(xué)生。最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)一些同學(xué)在教室使用手機(jī)，影響學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)封信，反映這些同學(xué)在教室使用手機(jī)的情況，并提出兩條建議。

要點(diǎn)提示 一：在課堂上經(jīng)常聽(tīng)到手機(jī)的鈴聲；二：有的同學(xué)還在課堂上發(fā)短信。

注意:

1．要求作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使信的內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫流暢；

2．詞數(shù)：不少于120；

3．參考詞匯：手機(jī)的鈴聲the ringing of mobile phones

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear principal,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Grade Two. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ringing of mobile phones, which has a bad effect on our study. What’s worse, some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobiole phone. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to study, so quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons.

To keep the classroom quiet, I suggest our school make the following rules about the use of mobile phones in the classroom. First, those with mobile phones should turn them off in class. Second, they should not talk on the phone or send short messages in the classroom. I think, if anyone breaks the rules, proper ways should be thought of to punish him or her.

I would appreciate it if you can take what I said into consideration! Thanks!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。