Question

你們學(xué)校最近做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，調(diào)查的主題是“你寒假會(huì)去做兼職賺錢(qián)嗎”。下面是調(diào)查結(jié)果：

結(jié)果	原因
89%選擇不去	(1)父母不允許 (2)學(xué)習(xí)太忙，沒(méi)時(shí)間 (3)不知道自己能做什么工作
11%選擇去	(1)學(xué)以致用 (2)積累社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn) (3)減輕父母的壓力

請(qǐng)你就此用英文寫(xiě)一篇文章，并簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表你自己的看法。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120～150；
2．可適當(dāng)拓展內(nèi)容以使行文連貫。生詞：調(diào)查survey。
                                                                                               
                                                                                             
                                                                                         
 

Answer 1

Recently，our school has carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-­time work during the winter holiday.89% of the students said no.The reasons are as follows：First，their parents won’t allow them to do so；second，they are so busy with their studies during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it；third，they are not sure what job they can do.However,11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday.They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice.Through work，they can gain lots of social experience.In addition，by doing a part-­time job to earn some money，they can reduce their parents’ economic pressure.
In my opinion，students should do some part­-time work，which can enrich their life and help them know more about society.

試題分析：這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫(xiě)作，它以表格的形式提出了論點(diǎn)（寒假兼職的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)）和論據(jù)，還以文字提示形式提出了話題（寒假是否會(huì)去做兼職賺錢(qián)）及需要考生自由發(fā)揮的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發(fā)表個(gè)人的見(jiàn)解。本文的重點(diǎn)是表格中兩種方式的優(yōu)，缺點(diǎn)，根據(jù)題目的特點(diǎn)，以三段式的形式來(lái)寫(xiě)作比較好。
根據(jù)內(nèi)容，盡管討論已經(jīng)發(fā)生，但它是就一般的暑假假期計(jì)劃而進(jìn)行的討論，沒(méi)有特定的時(shí)間界定，因而考生應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主。相當(dāng)一部分考生用一般過(guò)去時(shí)進(jìn)行論述，這會(huì)失掉較多的分?jǐn)?shù)。從題目所給的開(kāi)頭可知應(yīng)用第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。
考點(diǎn):考查議論文寫(xiě)作 
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文題型是考生分詞熟悉的正反觀點(diǎn)類(lèi)的議論文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中也有相應(yīng)的模板。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主，發(fā)表個(gè)人意見(jiàn)時(shí)使用第一人稱(chēng)。本文的要點(diǎn)均已給出，考生需要使用合適的連接詞把孤立的要點(diǎn)聯(lián)系成文。如for one thing, for another; besides, firstly, secondly, last but not least等。也要使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯詞組如be supposed to do sth, benefit 等以提升文章的檔次分。在文章紅可以適當(dāng)使用一至兩句諺語(yǔ)如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高獲得高分的可能性。