Question

目前，有些高中學(xué)生在校談戀愛(ài)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括學(xué)生和家長(zhǎng)、老師的意見(jiàn)看法，并簡(jiǎn)要陳述你自己的觀點(diǎn)。
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It is not difficult to notice the phenomenon that some students fall in love at high school. Should a student have a lover at an early age?

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It is not difficult to notice the phenomenon that some students fall in love at high school. Should a student have a lover at an early age?
This topic has been discussed for many years. Although most of the students disapprove of having a boyfriend or a girlfriend at high school, they still hold a different view from their parents’ and teachers’. The students argue that parents and teachers should care more for them and not blame them because criticism makes things worse.
However , parents and teachers believe that love at school will definitely have a bad effect on study since love prevents students focusing on their studies. Therefore, when noting young lovers , parents and teachers will always criticize the lovers and tell them only the disadvantages of falling in love.
As far as I am concerned, adults should explain the importance of learning to the teenagers so that the young can realise their duty as students. Then, I suppose, the seed of love can be kept in mind and become a beautiful memory.

文章是關(guān)于高中生在校談戀愛(ài)的文章，所談話題與考生的生活息息相關(guān)，所以他們有話可說(shuō)。審題時(shí)注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，要表達(dá)出學(xué)生的看法，家長(zhǎng)的看法，以及老師的看法，最后表示個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。在表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，要清晰地表達(dá)出反對(duì)的態(tài)度，同時(shí)提出要注意教育的方式，不能過(guò)于生硬。寫(xiě)作時(shí)候要注意使用合適的連接詞讓文章更流暢，也要變換使用各種句式，提升文章的檔次。