Question

為慶祝6月5日“世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日”，某英文報社將舉行一次英文作文競賽，呼吁人們保護(hù)環(huán)境，提出有效的保護(hù)措施。請以下面的內(nèi)容為參考，寫一篇文章投稿。
1. 回收利用有用物質(zhì)，掩埋有害物質(zhì)；
2. 廢水、廢氣要凈化；
3. 植樹造林，保護(hù)環(huán)境；
4. 保護(hù)海洋，禁止過度捕魚；
5. 充分利用自然資源。
注意：
1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；
2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐句翻譯。

Answer 1

Possible version:
Nowadays, pollution is getting worse and worse. The damage to the environment is getting serious. In my opinion, we should take some measures to protect the environment.
To protect the environment, I think we should do the following things. Some garbage can be recycled, while the harmful things should be put in a safe place. Smoke and wastewater should be cleaned before they go into the air. If too many trees are cut down, forests will disappear. We should do our best to take good care of the environment. For example, we should plant trees and stop using disposable chopsticks and stop throwing garbage everywhere. With modern fishing methods, more and more fish are caught. If too many fish are taken from the sea, there will soon be none left. If the rivers are polluted, we will die from the poison. We should make full use of natural resources, or we will be in great damage very soon.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。