Question

書面表達（滿分25）
作為高三學生，你經(jīng)歷過多次考試，體驗過成功，也遭遇過失敗。請你根據(jù)下面的提示內(nèi)容，簡要概述中學生中普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度，并結合自身實際，說明你的觀點。

態(tài)度一	態(tài)度二	你的態(tài)度
當考試結果不如人意時，情緒低落，喪失信心，不再繼續(xù)努力	當考試失敗時，分析并找出失敗的原因，鼓勵自己，增強自信，避免再犯同樣的錯誤。	失敗乃成功之母……

要求：
1．詞數(shù)：120左右；
2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
As middle school students, we have all taken examinations of different types and  
         

Answer 1

As middle school students, we have all taken examinations of different types and experienced success as well as failure．Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．
Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure, while others are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies．As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．
Fortunately, some students take quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won’t repeat the mistakes in their later examinations．
As far as I’m concerned, I believe that failure is the mother of success．So long as we can find out the cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．

首先審好題，英語作文關鍵在于讀懂題及利用好題目所提供的線索和細節(jié)，本篇要求學生能根據(jù)提示用120字簡要概述中學生中普遍存在的對考試失敗的兩種態(tài)度及說說自己的看法。作為學生先要把開頭讀懂，應以為:作為中學生我們所有人已經(jīng)考過不同類型的考試，要接著說在考試中經(jīng)歷過成功和失敗，成功和失敗本身是2種不同的體驗，為了讓句子更協(xié)調(diào)，只能第一個詞用and 第二個用as well as，對于學生考試只能是exams，而不同的學生對于考試的態(tài)度不同，考后的結果也就不同，對于失敗的態(tài)度也就不同。Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．有了失敗，學生都有不同的反應，接下來詳細描述就好了。結合提示，態(tài)度一當考試結果不如人意時（failure，disappointed），情緒低落（become low in spirits），喪失信心（lose one’s heart），不再繼續(xù)努力(don’t want to make further efforts),這些反應只代表了部分同學，所以只能用some,我們中的一些Some of us，連句子就變成Some of us become low in spirits in face of failue ，面對face,是對自己失望以至于不努力，while others are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies。不努力，隨著時間的流逝，由不好變得更糟。As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．結合提示態(tài)度二中，由于采取了積極的態(tài)度（take quite positive attitudes）分析并找出失敗的原因（analyz the cause of their failure），鼓勵自己（encourage themselves），增強自信（become more confident），避免再犯同樣的錯誤（won’t repeat the mistakes in their later examinations）用過渡詞將2種態(tài)度分開Fortunately．效果就不一樣。至于我相信失敗是成功之母，要翻譯出來并加以說明。I believe that failure is the mother of success。原因是只要找準失敗的原因加以改進，學習就能有所提高我們才能實現(xiàn)自己的夢想。So long as we can find out the cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．只要So long as，找出find out，改變學習的方法improve our ways of learning，取得極大地進步make great progress，把夢想變?yōu)楝F(xiàn)實turn our dream into reality，最后就是把句子順序調(diào)整好，然后通讀全文，不妥當?shù)牡胤皆偕约诱{(diào)整。