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假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以

下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或

修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

One day a child was play with a vase of great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried,he could not pull it out. His father tried his best,too,but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said, "Now,my son,why have one more try? Open your hand or hold your fingers out straight as you saw I doing,and then pull.” To his surprise,the child says, "I can't hold my fingers straight like that,be?cause I don't want to drop my penny. ”Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world's worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.

Answer 1

One day a child was play with a vase of great value.

playing He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried,he could carelessly not pull it out. His father tried his best,too,but their ef?forts were in \ vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said, "Now,my son,why A have when not one more try? Open your hand or hold your fingers out and straight as you saw i doing,and then pull.”To his sur-me prise,the child says ,"i can't hold my fingers straight like said that,because i don't want to drop my penny." Thousand of Thousands us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world's worthless holding penny that we cannot achieve liberation.