Question

第二節(jié)開放作文

  請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

   

 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

基本分析：

1. 三分之一描寫要點(diǎn)：陽光，樓(很靠近)，彎曲的樹。（the sun, two apartments/ flats closely-located, the winding/ twisted tree）

2. 三分之二議論著眼立意：

—— 1.人生角度：在成長(zhǎng)的道路上（樹的成長(zhǎng)），有曲折，有困難，（建筑的阻擋，彎曲）但是只要向著光明和希望（太陽）去努力拼搏，堅(jiān)持不懈，還是能夠沖破桎梏取得成功（樹在樓的夾縫中長(zhǎng)高了，超出建筑）。

—— 2.和諧角度： 城市的發(fā)展（建筑）和環(huán)境的可持續(xù)發(fā)展（樹的成長(zhǎng)）要協(xié)調(diào)，要平衡，才能欣然共存（在陽光下）

3. 立意與現(xiàn)實(shí)生活關(guān)系：1. 引導(dǎo)90后要具有積極的生活態(tài)度，生活非一帆風(fēng)順的。2. 扣住低碳生活的環(huán)保熱點(diǎn)，城市和環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展也是低碳生活的必需。

Answer 1

參考范文(官方)：

In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable condition. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard. But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does。