Question

【題目】短文改錯(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight . And a larger percentage sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey parents or teachers. Personally, I think we should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without a sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only studies. As a result, I suggest we given less homework more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

【解析】

第一處：clear→clearly。詞性錯誤。此處修飾過去分詞shown，要用副詞clearly＂清晰地＂。

第二處：surveying→surveyed。非謂語動詞錯誤。本句中的謂語動詞是have，故students后應是分詞作后置定語，survey與所修飾的students構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，所以用過去分詞。

第三處：去掉too。副詞多用。句中已經(jīng)有as well as表示＂也＂了，故句尾的too是多余的。

第四處：lacks→lack。主謂一致錯誤。percentage作主語時，謂語與它所修飾的名詞或指代的名詞一致。此處指學生，所以謂語動詞用復數(shù)。

第五處：our→their。代詞錯誤。42%的學生不聽他們父母和老師的話。主語是42% of the students，是第三人稱，故此處形容詞性物主代詞用their。

第六處：student→students。名詞單復數(shù)錯誤。we后面的名詞是其同位語，所以用student的復數(shù)形式以與we一致。

第七處：Without后加a。冠詞漏用。body是可數(shù)名詞，且此處泛指一個好的身體，故加冠詞a。

第八處：on→to。介詞錯誤。pay attention to＂注意……＂是固定搭配，此處用的是該短語的被動形式。

第九處：are→be。虛擬語氣錯誤。suggest在此處表示＂建議＂，因此后跟的賓語從句應用虛擬語氣，即從句謂語用＂should+do＂形式，且should可以省略。故此處應把are改為be。

第十處：or→and。連詞錯誤。我建議我們應該少被布置點作業(yè)，多些時間進行課外活動。本句是肯定句，此處不表示選擇意義，而指的是并列的兩個名詞，表示＂及＂，應用and。