Question

【題目】短文改錯 (每小題1分，共10分)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

When Molly's father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8,hand him a bag. The father was in hurry so he didn't know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small stone. The busy father smiled, finished eating, and sweeping the desk clean into the dustbin include Molly's junk. This evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it: I love you, Daddy. The father went to his office hurried, carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell her about the junk. It was turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk and treasures!

Answer 1

【答案】

When Molly's father was about to work, his daughter Molly, aged 8, him a bag. The father was in hurry so he didn't know what was inside. While having lunch, he took out the contents: a plastic dinosaur, a tiny sea shell and three small . The busy father smiled, finished eating, and the desk clean into the dustbin Molly's junk. evening, Molly wanted her bag back because she had not made a note into it: I love you, Daddy. The father went to his office , carrying the junk home. He asked Molly to tell about the junk. It turned out that everything in the bag had a story. To Molly they were not junk treasures!

【解析】

第一處：由前面的was判斷此處用一般過去時，故把hand改為handed。

第二處：in a hurry是固定搭配，表示＂匆忙＂，故在hurry前加a。

第三處：由前面的three可知，此處用可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把stone改為stones。

第四處：此處與前面的smiled, finished是一系列的動作，也應(yīng)該是用一般過去時，故把sweeping改為swept。

第五處：由句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處使用介詞including，表示＂包括＂，故把include改為including。

第六處：此處表示＂那天晚上＂，故把This改為That。

第七處：修飾動詞went用副詞，故把hurried改為hurriedly。

第八處：此處指代主語he，故把her改為him。

第九處：It turned out that表示＂結(jié)果是、被證明是＂，故把was去掉。

第十處：此處表示語義的轉(zhuǎn)折，故把a(bǔ)nd改為but。