Question

你所在的班級(jí)將要舉辦一次主題為“What can we do for our school?”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，要求從以下四方面任選二至三個(gè)進(jìn)行闡述，并舉例加以說(shuō)明。
1. 關(guān)心他人； 2. 美化校園；3. 愛(ài)護(hù)學(xué)校；4. 營(yíng)造氛圍。
要求：1. 結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、條理清晰、語(yǔ)言豐富優(yōu)美、語(yǔ)法正確、內(nèi)容完整的短文;
2. 詞數(shù)80左右；
3. 文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。  
4. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，且不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（10分）
參考詞匯：愛(ài)心：love and care  校園：campus  氛圍：environment
What can we do for our school?
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
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Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

One version:
What can we do for our school?
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
I think we should make our campus more beautiful. We can plant trees and flowers in the school. We can also have a good habit of putting the rubbish in the trashcan. Besides, we should protect the facilities in our school. When we leave the classroom, we never forget to turn off the lights or close the door.
If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will turn our school into a better place to study and live in.
Thank you for listening!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫(xiě)一篇演講稿。題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語(yǔ)句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。