Question

假設(shè)你是Peter,請根據(jù)以下信息，寫一篇題為My Family的書面表達(dá)，字?jǐn)?shù)至少六句話。標(biāo)題和結(jié)尾已給出。

My Family
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I have a happy family. I love my family.

Answer 1

One possible version：
My family
My name is Peter. I come from America. I am twelve years old.I’m a student. There are three people in my family:my father ,my mother and I. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher.We are happy every day. I have a happy family . I love my family.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，Peter介紹他的家庭。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am......；There are......及We are.......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了自己的姓名和年齡，接下來介紹家庭成員的職業(yè)，最后指出愛自己的家人。此處用了come from， twelve years old，every day. 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。