Question

最近，“中國式過馬路”成為網(wǎng)友熱議的話題。下面的漫畫反映了部分中國人闖紅燈過馬路的現(xiàn)象。請(qǐng)根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容請(qǐng)以“Keeping safe on the roads”為題用英語寫一篇詞數(shù)80左右的短文。
內(nèi)容要求：
1. 描述漫畫內(nèi)容，并對(duì)該現(xiàn)象作簡(jiǎn)要評(píng)議；
2. 提出至少兩點(diǎn)“安全過馬路”的建議。
提示詞（可選用）：
a group of, cross, sidewalk, obey the rules, traffic lights, be careful

Answer 1

Keeping Safe on the Roads
Many people are not careful when crossing the roads. As we can see in the picture, a car is running while a group of people are crossing the road even if the red light is still on. Running the lights is dangerous and it may cause accidents. How can we keep safe on the roads?
First, we should obey the traffic rules and not cross the roads until the “walk” sign turns green. Second, stop and look both ways before crossing the roads. Third, walk along the sidewalks. (88 words)

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真看圖并認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一些征求建議的語氣的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)所給單詞的提示，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文主旨分明，點(diǎn)名了文章的中心思想。開頭指出現(xiàn)在現(xiàn)在人過馬路不遵守交通規(guī)則的現(xiàn)象。第二段提出了安全過馬路的建議，we should obey the traffic rules and not cross the roads until the “walk” sign turns green.這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。最后點(diǎn)名了中心思想。