Question

十年以后，你的生活會(huì)是什么樣呢？請(qǐng)你以“My life in ten years”為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。
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Answer 1

Everyone has his dream. My ideal job is to be a doctor when I grow up. Ten years later，I think I will be a doctor. I will love my patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
In order to make my dream come true, I will study hard and get more knowledge. What’s more, I’m going to do more exercises to keep me stronger. To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream must come true that day.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹自己未來(lái)生活的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的賓語(yǔ)從句和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少. 如: grow up長(zhǎng)大；as much as possible盡可能的；in order to為了；come true實(shí)現(xiàn)等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.