Question

書(shū)面表達(dá) (滿(mǎn)分10分)
假設(shè)你叫李俊，你的美國(guó)朋友David想要在中國(guó)結(jié)交更多的朋友。你通過(guò)電子郵件，把你的同學(xué)王明介紹給他。王明情況見(jiàn)下表：

性別	男
年齡	14
外貌	方臉，大眼睛，短發(fā)，高個(gè)子；
個(gè)性	很有幽默感，替朋友保守秘密，從不說(shuō)他人壞話；
愛(ài)好	喜歡動(dòng)物，在家養(yǎng)了一些寵物；
理想	當(dāng)一名校長(zhǎng) (headmaster)，讓學(xué)生有更多的時(shí)間娛樂(lè)；
春節(jié)計(jì)劃	到美國(guó)旅游，參觀美國(guó)白宮。

 要求：1. 注意文章條理，語(yǔ)句通順；2. 詞數(shù)80左右，郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不
計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Jun

Answer 1

Dear David,
How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you.
He is a 14-year-old boy. He has a square face, big eyes and short hair. He is tall. He has a good sense of humour. He keeps secrets for his friends and never says bad words about others.
He loves animals. He keeps some pets at home.
He wants to be a headmaster when he grows up. He hopes to make his students have more time for fun.
He is planning to have a trip to America and visit the White House at the Spring Festival.
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Jun

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，首先，要注意格式，要有標(biāo)題、落款，根據(jù)題目要求用準(zhǔn)確的詞表達(dá)出來(lái)，特別注意對(duì)不會(huì)的表達(dá)進(jìn)行替換，展開(kāi)來(lái)說(shuō)，同時(shí)將文章寫(xiě)成經(jīng)典的“三段式”文章，使用自己積累的高級(jí)詞匯，作文模板，起承轉(zhuǎn)合的詞，將文章寫(xiě)出水平。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，直入主題，平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)多進(jìn)行作文模板的記憶，萬(wàn)能句型的積累，在寫(xiě)作之前，首先對(duì)題目進(jìn)行認(rèn)真的審清，并在腦海中回想自己積累的哪些句式、句型、單詞能用進(jìn)來(lái)，這些單詞、句型都應(yīng)是經(jīng)典的，不會(huì)錯(cuò)的。英語(yǔ)文字不宜寫(xiě)的太小，所有字母都頂橫線寫(xiě)好，看起來(lái)卷面整潔，寫(xiě)錯(cuò)的地方只需輕輕劃一筆就行，切不可反復(fù)涂黑。