Question

書面表達(dá) （本大題共10分）
假如你叫Mike，是無錫市某初級中學(xué)的一名九年級學(xué)生。今年11月22日是感恩節(jié)，為感謝師恩，學(xué)校將組織由學(xué)生推選“十佳教師”的評選活動(dòng)。你計(jì)劃寫一封推薦信給校長Mr Smith，推薦你的老師Lucy當(dāng)選，請你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示寫一封電子郵件給Mr Smith。
內(nèi)容提示見下表：

基本情況	英語教師；今年35歲；教過很多學(xué)生
性格特征	從不輕言放棄；有足夠的耐心教我們說英語
突出事跡	曾幫助學(xué)生參加英語口語比賽并獲得高的分?jǐn)?shù)
個(gè)人愿望	1.想通過努力成為優(yōu)秀教師，希望…… 2.想做志愿者工作，因?yàn)椤��?br />

注意：
1.推薦信須包括表格內(nèi)所有信息，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
2.表格中“個(gè)人愿望”一欄，請用自己的2～3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，推薦信的開頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4.參考詞匯：英語口語比賽 Spoken English Contest   志愿的 voluntary
Dear Mr Smith,                                                      
How are you these days? Today I would like to recommend our teacher Lucy as one of the top ten teachers.                                                                        
                                                                                                                                                                     
                                                                               
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                               
                                                                             
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,
How are you these days? Today I would like to recommend our teacher Lucy as one of the top ten teachers.She is an English teacher.She is thirty-five years old.She has taught a lot of students.She never gives up easily and she is patient enough to teach us to speak English.She once helped students (to) join in Spoken English Contest and they got high marks.
She wants to be an excellent teacher through hard work/after working hard.She hopes that her students will like her.She wants to do voluntary workbecause she wants to help more people in need.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。