Question

今年是新泰市創(chuàng)建全國衛(wèi)生城市關(guān)鍵的一年。“新泰是我家，創(chuàng)城靠大家！”作為中學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)積極參與。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下
提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
要點(diǎn)：
(1)尊敬老師，對(duì)人禮貌；
(2)幫助他人，友善待人；
(3)遵守交規(guī)，過馬路走斑馬線，不闖紅燈；
(4)保護(hù)環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾，不踩草地等；
(5)補(bǔ)充兩句個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。
參考詞匯：respect(尊敬)；be polite to；obey(遵守)；traffic rules；zebra crossing(斑馬線)
要求：
(1)內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；
(2)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息。

Answer 1

Xintai is now making its effort to become a national civilized city.As students，what should we do?
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others.We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us.Besides，we must obey the traffic rules.When crossing the streets，we should walk on the zebra crossing.And we mustn‘t go across the street when the traffic lights are red.What’s more，we
should protect our environment.For example，we mustn't step on the grass and climb trees.Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere.
Xintai is our hometown.Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用征求建議的語氣。注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的征求建議的語氣should加動(dòng)詞原形，為文章增色不少.如: We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us.Besides和We must respect our teachers and be polite to others等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.